Help with some dialogue in my book!?

its really good! i wouldn't change anything but describe more things, like more of the scene, or what his face looks like more, like this "Tyson's long, jet black hair sweeped his teary, blue eyes as he looked up at me, hurtfully, and whispered to me sternly, yet gently, "..." that is just an example, here is another one but this one is just for describing purposes. "drew turned towards me, and looked me in the eyes. i could tell that deep down in his beautiful, emerald green eyes, i meant something to him. not just a girlfriend, or a friend, but i knew he loved me, and i loved him back. and nobody could break this bond between us, not his ex girlfriend, no matter how much she hates him, or his friends either. and he shows me off to the world when im in sweats, and he holds my hand when im with his friends..." just an example. your work is REALLY good, it has inspired me, im gonna go write a book.